All Comments on 'Consummation Ch. 01'

DAMN... that was HOT, If it were a little longer I would be sliding off my seat... I would love to watch two guys. Very well written.

Fine HOT SEX! But the girl is the most improbable female imaginable. I do not want to know where this mishmash may be headed.

I really enjoyed the turn of scene from present to past and back to present (with a hint of future thrown in to tease us...). IMO, a well described "first time" experience between two men who are not only having hot sex, but who also consummated a long held love and desire for each other.

The best of the stories I've read so far.

Great start, like that GF secretly watched the 1st. time and wants to watch again. And nobody said gay, fag, etc.

I'd love it if my boyfriend was into this kind of thing, having a bi boyfriend who lets you watch when he's with a guy or would be willing to do a MMF threesome is so so hot.