All Comments on 'Contracting Love'

This story needs a lot of help. Story line is not fully developed, characters are shallow and the grammar is horrendous! You need an editor desperately to help you craft better stories!

Good god, that is the most atrocious abuse of the English language I have come across in a long time.

The plot definitely has merit and could be turned into a great tale but please get an editor to help you along. It will pay dividends in the end.

Keep up the work

Plot is good, execution is poor, very jumbled, no flow.

Work on your writing mechanics and spelling ... find an editor ... if this is any indication, you have romantic stories to tell ... tell them without distractions ...

when you get this edited repost it and maybe more chapters will be asked for.

PLEASE before you post more, GET AN EDITOR, it was painful to read. Very poor grammar and spelling. The flow...well there really was no flow to the story. All characters are shallow, no redeeming or likable traits for any of them. 3* for the effort.

As stated the story was a good concept,,,but I feel that english may not be your first language, which in turn makes it a little difficult to follow. Please try not to take negative commets, as a reason to stop writing. Do yourself a favor find an editor to help with you spelling, grammer, puncuation, and story flow. With at least three of those bases covered, and a little character develpment, this would be a great story. But most of all don't give up!!