All Comments on 'Control Game'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awesome!

fuckin amaaazing!!! very very well written.... eagerly waiting for more from you..

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I have to agree with the other comment

Awesome, when is chapter 2 coming?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
OMG that's hot! Krista is the bomb!

Please continue the series! It's a great piece of writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I loved the writing about the hard sex! When is the next addition

Let's get the next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
WOW!!!

Please give us more of the story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
4.5

Some minor mistakes, but all-in-all a great start.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GREAt

Can't wait for the next Chapter. MAde me hard would love for a woman to do this with me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please get the next episode out!

Mmmmmmm......I want more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Next please!

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great one

pls do post the next chapter, im craving for it

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
When is the next chapter coming?

Please, I want to see what happens!

AfoojaAfoojaover 12 years ago
The best sex I've ever read

The sex scene was over the top. Maybe packed a little too full with description but overall extremely well done. I'm dying to read about Naples and hoping John is going to get some shocking surprises as to where that wand goes.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Dimensions

Better pull out your geometry book - NOBODY has a 7" diameter cock. Maybe 7" circumference.

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