All Comments on 'Control: Who Wants It? Ch. 02'

by Templar_Writer

Sort by:
  • 3 Comments
jenorma2012jenorma2012about 8 years ago
not really

I do not know how anyone could submit like this, and even allow a collar to be put on themselves, it may not be a dog collar, but that is what she is being treated like a pet

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uabout 8 years ago

There are varying degrees of BDSM from light & private to public humiliations & intense pain. This is an "interesting" world to say the least. I do think however, Jessie's character should maintain her dominance & professionalism at work and in public places like restaurants where she could run into clients. Once again, Control: Who Wants It? Is raising the temperature on the erotic barometer. On a side note, the errors were greatly reduced in this story which is nice. Thank you

Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 7 years ago
Excellent story to this point

As a Leatherman of 30 years, I have enjoyed how Amber has created the desire to serve. I have seen far to many M/s (or if you insist D/s) relationships fail due to how the relationship was originally formed. To me creating the desire to willingly submit is the most important aspect of a M/s relationship.

Add to that the fact that Amber told Jessie that she would never have to submit to a man (I really HATE men making an appearance in Lesbian M/s stories) or anyone that she did not know very well.

I am getting ready to read part 3 and I am a little concerned that there will be some form of control issues between Amber and Asha. Keep in mind I am a very old Leatherman and as such, don't understand or like this wishy washy I am Domme one minute but submitting the next. Drives me nuts, so hopefully if the two Dommes do meet, they can maintain their status while playing with the 2 girls. I know it can be done because I see it every time I go to a Leather event (and yes even some of the very few BDSM events I attend).

I would like to see Shura added to Amber's family. And frankly even adding Mary sounds like an interesting idea. I know many Mistresses and Female identified Masters (Yes there are many of them and they are both Femme and Butch, so don't go there) that have multiple girls in their household.

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous