All Comments on 'Control: Who Wants It? Ch. 03'

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Mymantoy999Mymantoy999over 7 years ago
Okay, that turned out good

I like that Mary is a "part time" girl. I can even accept that in the "play times" Mary s above jessie. That being said, I do have to hope that Amber will make it perfectly clear to Mary that at work Jessica is still the boss. Amber should ALWAYS be the Mistress (although I know that Amber can still be Mistress and control jessie at work, while not interfering with her duties).

I had also hoped that Amber would take complete control of Shura. but I understand Amber's feelings for jessie and her desire to maintain their relationship.

And again, I sincerely hope that in the next installment that Amber doesn't suddenly "submit" to Asha. that would (at least to me) ruin the entire story line.

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