All Comments on 'Controlled by Desire Ch. 03'

For your future writings, here are a few grammar tips.

1) Use "than" and not "then" in a phrase such as "more beautiful than ever." "Then" is related to time and "than" is used in comparisons.

2) "You're" is a conjunction of "you" and "are."

3) "Your" is a possessive pronoun.

4) "It's" is a conjunction of "it" and "is."

5) "Its" is a possessive pronoun.

Despite any slight grammatical aberrations, I enjoyed this from start to finish. I think you did a great job with the characters and with the descriptions - the action was incredibly hot.

Looking forward to reading more of your stories, keep writing!

What a story! FemDom, MC, preg! A Trifecta!

More!!!!

More please I love big round dominating women. Can't you continue this story?

Yes, a continuation is needed to show her doing to him what she promises at the end of this chapter.

My comment "Yes, a continuation is needed to show her doing to him what she promises at the end of this chapter" was meant for "Mayor's Corruption."

Awesome story.. i check the site everyday to see if you have posted another one.. Please keep writing.. and Vergas111.. where are you? please start writing again :)

what a great story, well written and hope to read more in the future

I really like the story arc but I did not feel there was enough conflict in the relationship. Sure She controls him, but his before/after is not very great. Is it anything more than changing girlfriends? And toward what he wanted even without "control" a curvy woman and one who took more initiative in sex. At no point doe he seem to have any reason to resist her control

I love the femdom, and sissy hubby stories. let the white boy cum and let her makr him suck a BBC to help her get horny enough to invite Liz to watch him perform.