All Comments on 'Controlling Nicola Ch. 01'

Great story, I really enjoyed reading it. It is obvious you put some real thought into this and it shows. I hope to see a lot more from you in the future.

Your story is one of the better mind control stories that I have read in awihle. I am looking forward to more chapters.

This was a wonderful story, and I hope you write some more chapters.

Top notch stuff. Hope you write more chapters.

This is a great story. There is absolutely no room for improvement and i look forward to any chapters that will come out in the (near)future.

Flawless story. Looking forward to any future chapters.

The story flowed along very well. I thought that it was great. The only thing that I found that I didn't like is that it came to an end so soon. I sure hope that there is a ch. 2 in the works.

Very well written and amazing characters and personalities that only got better as the story progressed. This story was time well spent! I'm worn out! But I'm more than ready for the next chapters!

Wow, just wow, gotta be one of the hottest stories I've read all year. The ending was awesome.

The story was awesome! In everyway from the plot, to the characters, and even the editing Great job writing, I am looking forward to future chapters.

I will have to read Pt. 2. I have no choice.

<<Such was his life, pretty average for a programmer, working for long stretches until they reach a mental block, then resting for a few days. Initially he'd chosen this line of work for no reason other than choosing his own hours, and by the time he realised that when his mind was whirring he had less control over his hours than people who work a 9 to 5 job>>

There is so much insight in these few words. Kittn is wise as well as sexy.

<<what are waiting for? You have nothing to lose... but your weight!>>

Brilliant. She is learned and witty too.