All Comments on 'Controlling Nicola Ch. 02'

Mind control is one thing but you deviated to much by including the non consent. The non consent ruined the fantasy for me.

How dare the last poster criticise an author for letting her creative imagination stray outside his fixed categories. This is a very well constructed universe lacking only local colour (what did the pub and chip shop look like inside; what colour box was the pizza in?). It's very sexy and engaging. The people live. I think the ending indicates a sequel. Can't wait.

Wow, that was... umm... disturbing... but you have a great writing style, very colourful and livid.

When is the next coming out? Can't wait...

Sex Kittn u have got to add to this story I and I am sure other fans of the story would love to read more!!!!