All Comments on 'Controlling Sara Ch. 02'

Constructive criticism: Commas indicate pauses. You overuse them. If you wouldn't pause whilst reading the sentence out loud, you don't need the comma.

you turned a great story od letting the husband live out his fantasy's but in the next chapter you destroyed his marage forever! fix this! end the sluttyness! make things right! i and other have grown to care for the husband and don't want his marage destroyed! have them move somewhere new! away from her rep if you have 2! make her happy with his size and make her pussy more sensitive so she will cum more from his small dick!

Another story stopped short. If I could give less than 1 * you would get it

This story is told completely by the husband. It is not surprising that another commenter empathized with him and his dilemma. I, however, see it differently. He created Sara the slut, and then turned her loose on her own. Now she loves strange cock more than her husband, and wants to be used, shared, and whored out by 65-year old Eric. I think it is clear that the twisted and perverted narrator of the story will not change Sara back to an innocent wife; his knowledge of what she has become, first under the influence of the pills, and then on her own initiative, will never leave him. So he will sit in his hidey-hole and watch Sara fuck other men, knowing that Sara thinks little of him and his sexual attractiveness. It may be that she will leave him and go to Eric in her own apartment and become his whore, and the husband will be out of the picture completely. This is a fantasy story of what could happen if one’s perverted fantasies were to become reality, and how that reality become something not imagined - or wanted - in the fantasies. The husband made his wife into a sexual object whose existence consisted of fucking, who was no longer a person of to be respected and cherished. For him, she became just a means for his masturbatory perversions. It is not surprising that when given the suggestion to act on her own initiative, Sara remade her new reality that no longer needed or included her husband. This is a fabulous story, and its imaginative plot takes it far beyond most “I want my wife to be a slut” stories. Me, I empathize with Sara, whose voice was rarely heard in the story, until the very end, when she spoke loud and clear. I loved that scene!