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All Comments on 'Controlling Young & Naughty Olivia Ch. 01'

by AruziaMelnik

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
good start

Good start to interesting erotica and hope to read more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
What a great beginning

Like the characters, setting, detailed descriptions.

Highly realistic and very believable.

Normally not a fan of chain stories; in this case I can’t wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Nice beginning!

Very fun story. Hope you plan more.

JusttooldJusttooldabout 9 years ago
good

Well done story and a pretty good read. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Excellent

Very well written, got me in the mood and waiting to read Olivia's next chapter

cutepatcutepatalmost 9 years ago

I liked this story a lot, will there be a second part?

ThunderhowlThunderhowlover 8 years ago
Hot!

I can't wait for the next chapter!

SugarDaddyDomSugarDaddyDomover 5 years ago
Its as if you read My mind

an excellent story, azuria. So much better than many submissions. Especially for a first post. I look forward to more.

Professor_GProfessor_Gabout 5 years ago
Excellent start

I hope this is the first installment of a series

H3nryH3nryover 4 years ago
More.

Keep her journey going...and make sure you are appropriately dressed when you write.

dr_meddr_medover 4 years ago
series?

I would really like to know how this storyline continues.

Great work!

Alpha_Male_UKAlpha_Male_UKover 4 years ago
Impressed

I was very Impressed by your first attempt little one.I will look forward to PT2

AruziaMelnikAruziaMelnikabout 2 years agoAuthor

I should have posted this earlier, but thank you all the readers who loved and favorited my first story. Your encouragement helped me keep writing.

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Writing has always been a passion of mine. I've written many different types of fiction but as I love reading erotica so much I thought I would now try my hand at writing some. I'm pretty friendly, as long as I like you. I'm outgoing, sometimes loud. On the outside, I am qui...