All Comments on 'Controls'

by Christinahorny

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
If I

If i wanted to read a story about a cheating slut wife and a cuckold husband .I would go to Loving Wife's . I guess another one slipped by them .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Subtle buildup...

almost imperceptible, but gave way to a very erotic ending.

A couple of the descriptions were so vivid, like when she rocked his finger; and the very powerful... "He drew her knees up".

I just reread that, I thought it said "She drew her knees up"... still very hot, but it actually gives way to my point: I would have loved if it was shown at the end some bigger-picture plateau from her. Never been touched so slow, or with such oily hands... wathever.

I really really loved it. Would read again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Pathetic

Should have had the father flip out

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichabout 11 years ago
Nicely done

A very good storyline and a well written story, along with a good edit to make the story flow smoothly.

Hot, erotic and extremely explicit as the step-son seduced his step-mother.

All that was needed is for the step-mother to become pregnant and not know who the father of her child was.

Thanks for the good read.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Best of both worlds?

What a fucking retard

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Wanker

I bet you sat there and jerked off you dickhead

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Stepmother?

Fucking a step anything is neither incest or taboo. This story sucked.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Really felt good reading this story, thanks. Enjoyed the characters and plot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
You are a master of erotica!

Your buildup ramps up the eroticism to the point where this reader is fairly holding my breath waiting for Sonny's cock to enter his birth canal. Very well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I love the scenario...

...approving hubby secretly witnessing on camera progressing sexual activity between his current wife and her stepson. Too bad there's not a sequel!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
IT WAS ALL HER FAULT ^*!^*!^*!

CHRISTINA JUST LOST ALL CONTROL,

SHE JUST GOT TOO HORNY. BUT IT

SEEMS THEY ALL GOT WHAT THEY

WANTED IN THE LONG RUN.

..THANKS..

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not Incest but gave you 5 stars.

5 stars for the story idea.

5 stars for the pace and activity.

5 stars for the final outcome.

Personally, I think the husband is a weirdo for suggesting, allowing, liking and wanting it all to happen.

The wife is a cheater for not keeping the husband/father informed.

And the son....well, he's just a lucky, horny young man, huh,?

Made a good read. 😊🙏🙏🙏😊

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

very horny to read must have been even better watching

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