by spider007
Whatever this is, it ain't a Loving Wife story!
I also believe that LIT should consider the Ass-to-Mouth transition the same way they prohibit 'Under 18' sex! The potential for serious-to-fatal infection is HUGE! Disgusting and distasteful (sorry) is bad enough, but there are few LIT readers who do NOT find at least one of LIT categories to include such D & D topics (in their own individual* tastes!) but 'dangerous' is a different kettle of fish!
*DWartNuts, for example, hates 'old hide!' (Mature)
...anon understands:
--that eroticism is in the mind of the eroticist
--that imagination knows no rules or bounds
--that there is a difference between fiction and reality
--that a brief departure into a daydream is a refreshing change from the nightmare of reality
--that musings are different from ethics
Voted '5'.
For those who continue to flame the author, his story, and/or this comment:
--go to Iraq and Afghanistan, and fix everything the US Armed Forces broke
--go to Washington, and fix the crushing national debt that ex-Pres Bush and his ... friends ...created
--go to the giant businesses [drug companies, insurance companies, NYSE, etc] and stop them from raping us economically
--go to a Batman movie in Colorado and make sure nobody gets hurt
Take these stories, all of them, to a psychiatrist and talk. Good luck with your demonic possession.
Everything that happened to Kim in this story has happened for real to me, except that it wasn't my husband putting me through my paces....it was whatever Black Man happened to be fucking me that night. Odds are i had never seen Him before and didn't even know His name. For a lot of women, being the nastiest sleaziest whore ever is a giant turn-on and what we really want to have happen. We love to fuck and love to be used, in every sense of the word.
Poorly crafted, uninspiring and uninteresting story from start to finish. You really need to go back to the drawing board.