All Comments on 'Cookies'

by Ashson

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Too Predictable

Maybe once you will surprise us and break out of your usual genre of the young lady reluctantly giving up her virtue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hmm

Might want to use more details..

clitlicker4uclitlicker4ualmost 7 years ago
Good story

Shame I don't have any girl scouts selling cookies in Tennessee

AxelottoAxelottoalmost 7 years ago

The enjoyment in reading your stories is in the flow, the plot is nearly always the same overall but its how you dress that plot each time that brings me back to read again and again. Nice little vignettes of not-really-reluctant girls/ladies getting what they wanted.

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