by RoseNostagia88
This is the only chapter I have read so far in this story and it is off to a promising start (as the title of my comment sums up) I cannot wait to get to the next part of the story, the characters are believable and i really want cookies and cream ice cream right now.
loved the story line and charactor development-enjoyed the hot sex scenes a whole lot-bring on chapter two sweet rose
Like how you used a unique food to make people twist and turn to the towns will. The main character is the last to fall into the trap. You explore most of the characters very deeply. Great expression, great storytelling.
Love the story but there’s no option available to rate it....5 stars obvs
Tess (UK)