All Comments on 'Coppernicous Pt. 03'

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arrowglassarrowglassalmost 9 years ago
Short and sensual...!!!

A fan in need

Of your next read

Well done I say...with a grin

Hoping you will do it again and again!

goldponygoldponyover 8 years ago
hmmmmmm

This is a story to fall in love with and for a long time. You feel his pain and the teases around him. And you feel outer soul of his life.There is sex, but making love is soooo

sweet. He had to get past the pain to see his marja again, and her wish of happiness.

If this is transition, I can't wait for the next several chapters. Great Read. GP

rightbankrightbankover 8 years ago
nicely written

an interesting "flash"

arrowglassarrowglassover 6 years ago
Short...sweet...special!

On to number 4!!!!

tsgtcapttsgtcaptover 1 year ago

Well written! Great mobility - drawing me on and in. Loving this story, again and again and again....

tsgtcapttsgtcapt11 months ago

Lovin' this tale!!

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