by SonofCallicious
I forgot to give Grand Teton credit for his usual great job of editing this story. Any errors are mine, alone. Thanks much!
There's still so much more to write about these characters, please do.
Going to be a busy night. Hope his leg can hold out. Looking forward to the next installment
I've been waiting almost a year, last I heard this author was in talks with Fat_Dad to do a 20th/21st Chapter, if you do post info here, I like this author's works, but like his dad's more.
I thought he was going to end up with the coach. This whole Lynn thing was unexpected.
Please let me know if there is any more. This story was amazing from start to finish. jimmyhmmnd@yahoo.com
If this is the end of the story, as it appears to be since it's the last post since 2018, it deserves a rating of 1 because as an ending I hate it.
So much is promised through the pages and it ends in a guess the breasts contest when there's clearly more to come later in the evening? It's also the last thing in SonofCallicious's submissions, so maybe they intended to write more but life jumped up and bit them in the ass.
Can't say I liked the age difference maybe if Toomas had been an older brother.
I've read this series several times, it really needs more chapters!! I love the story line and think the characters are real and believable. More chapters, please?!
When does the epilogue or next chapters cone out? What does Lynn do after graduation? How does the B&B go? And more!!