by happyday
I loved it. I was a real story w/ a real plot and lovely sweet hot sex. MORE!
I want to hear more about these lovers! I want to hear how the world receives them, their future, their up, downs, and all the little things that make life life.
Finally, a real romantic story of a couple that's not meant to be together, but are perfect for each other. And a touching, and very hot, and sweet love scene.
-abigail
THIS STORY IS SEXY BUT SWEET AT THE SAME TIME! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I honestly LOVED the story. Just so captivating and riveting, and i have to admit better then any romance novel i've ever read.
A beautiful tale of love with a hot, sensual clinax...I loved it.
The idea is very nice, fancy and realistic at the same time, but the telling of the story doesn't convey any feeling. This is a positive kind of failure Imo.
This is a beautiful story, about not being judgmental, and treasuring love wherever you find it. Keep it up! I hope you write more about these characters. I love them!
I loved it!!! Its so amazing don't listen to people who hate it there crazy.
I love the storyline and build up. The ending was just as amazing as the beginning. You had me worried about Faih for a moment.
I love this story. Some stories are good as sec scenes in themselves, others are better as a story unto themselves. Though the sec may have been drawn out more, I thing going too far would have ruined the essence of the story- two women finding each other. Despite a few mistakes here and there, mostly punctuation, this was a superbly well written story. I enjoy plot lines and character buildup in a story. Fantastic job, and I seriously think the story is way underrated.
Enjoyed the characters. I look forward to more of your writingskills. Cheers.
I think you should make a secound one where your story continues to see if they stay together or break up....