All Comments on 'Cops and Rubbers Ch. 02'

"Ground hips", not "grinded hips". "Knelt," not "kneeled." Sorry, but this sort of thing breaks my concentration (maybe I have ADHD, but there it is). That said, this story was so good, so hot, so inventive, so believable, that it was well worth working a little on concentrating. Good job, Scotch!

I hate it when I make those mistakes. I know what you mean, "distracting". I went back and forth about the 'ground' thing. This is only my third attempt so I appreciate your patience. Thanks for the encouragement.