All Comments on 'Coquette and her Cuckold Ch. 01'

Good start - very erotic characters

I can see a cuckold playing croquet.

Another story about a queer.

I like the different style and the way you handled it. The important thing is that it will make my wife horny when I tell it to her. I will wait for part two first.

He has a mindless slut for a wife, who flirts with any and everything, see that dog? Now he waits for her to fuck another man. Does he get any of Claudia? No of course not she is to tired from laying on the deck chairs with her high heels flipping around.

Not so bad. Reasonably hot writing, although on a theme most sane people find off-putting.

This is a disaster. The "writer" has no skill at writing, no imagination, and only a third grader's understanding of punctuation and grammar.