All Comments on 'Cordial Relations'

by Ann Douglas

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sontoriginyusontoriginyuover 6 years ago

i do believe we may need a second part of the story

jsmangisjsmangisover 6 years ago
The Best In-law Story I've Ever Read

You continue to write the best stories I've read on Literotica. I always read your stories first, because they are the best on this site!

MICHAELG1963MICHAELG1963over 6 years ago
Bravo

The ability you have to write these stories, fill in all the details of the characters and just let the stories flow is simply amazing. I echo a lot of the comments I have read from your readers, you are one of the BEST, and this one could use a part 2 or 3

TSreaderTSreaderover 6 years ago
A very yummy story!

So well done; I wish there was more! Thank you!

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 6 years ago

Good story. Sure wish there could be more of this.

jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
good story

and your build-up is very good

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wonderful

One of the best lesbian stories I have read. Wonderful build up. A story that kept me engaged. Ann Douglas I have only recently started to take notice of your work,bit you are one of the best writers on Lit. Your lesbian genre stories (especially) are over the top. You are now a favorite author, deservedly so.

Andygorn2Andygorn2over 6 years ago

A really good story, good build-up and background, lovely descriptions and passion.

JPGmvnyJPGmvnyabout 5 years ago
And Then?

This is one where I really would like to know where, if at all, they were now, ten years later.

CupidCupidCupidCupid8 months ago

The build up was exquisite. I liked the way Rachel took the initiative first suprising Belle. Only for Belle to give Rachel a lesson on how things should be done. Erotically!

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I'm an average wife and mother, well, maybe not so average, who likes to write Erotica. I'm not a professional writer. In fact, until I tried writing my first story in the early 90s, I hadn't written anything longer than a letter since high school 20 years before. I like ...