All Comments on 'Corporate Policy Ch. 02'

Great story so far. How I envy Pauline.

This was very erotic and definitely got me hard. Pacing was very nice, though the tone at the end seemed (to me) a little abrupt. The biggest problem I see is in establishing and maintaining a P.O.V. (point-of-view) that doesn't confuse the reader. We're inside the head of both "Tom" and "Paul" (close 3rd person) but you shift us back and forth within the same paragraph -- even within the same sentence, as in this example:

"Tom wished Paul would turn around, but he remained silent as he picked up panties..."

Who picked up the panties? We were in Tom's head and then suddenly we're doing a Paul action. See the problem? Work on that but, PLEASE, keep writing.

Thanks for the fun read.

Awesome I was cumming in my pants before the end of the story! can't wait for the next installment!

Fantastic, terrific, erotic story. If it was me, I'd never have the main character show girly tendencies, the man would be the man and the "girl" would be the "girl". But that's just my weird fixation with gender roles.

What I think you capture in this is the erotic connection between the two men. What's good about your stories is you go beyond the surface details and try to connect with the real emotional feeling of this happening.

It's hot.

I too am a married CD and I wish my boss would catch me dressed up as his woman. It would be wonderful if he too was a CD so we could both enjoy hot tranny sex while we suck each other's cocks and he fucks me deep and hard. Please tell more stories like this one.

Cant wait for part 3 and to see what happens with Pauline & Tom on their 'conference'