All Comments on 'Corrupting Amber Ch. 05'

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robbie777robbie777over 19 years ago
excellant

love it .rob

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
writing

this is the best written section of your story so far

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Keep Up the Good Work!

I hope that you will continue. Perhaps we can get to high heels, spandex, and eventually latex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
great story

great story. you have got me hooked, I hope that you finish the story and turn her into a true slut. piercings, tattoo's, heels, etc.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Unngghhh!

Wow! One of the best stories I've ever read! Great fantasy! Especially the smoking! MORE!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Amazing story, can't wait for chapter 6

Don't be afraid go for it?

Lets see how bad she can get.

Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
More

Fantastic. Please more, more, more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Keep it cumming!

While I think it's possible to go TOO far, there's no denying this story is HOT and getting HOTTER! Just

don't wind up with Amber chain-smoking filterless Gitanes and lying on her side to service an endless

line of horny men woth her pussy and ass while IVs of morphine and Everclear drip into her arms...

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Nice One!

Not read a story like this for a long time keep it coming!!!

saturswingsaturswingover 13 years ago
Yes!

I have THOROUGHLY enjoyed this story. VERY well done. Hot writing, hot subject. A winner. Thanks very much for sharing and hope you keep this one up...like it kept me up. :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Are you kidding?

$30 for an eighth? You got fleeced.

LamentationLamentationalmost 6 years ago
Re: Are you kidding

Of course he did! He has no idea what he’s doing with the pot. He didn’t even think to get papers.

Terri19Terri19about 1 year ago

Excellent cant wait to see how slutty Amber becomes, love to see piercing and tattoos and more!!

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