All Comments on 'Corrupting Amber Ch. 12'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
love it!

Awesome story, keep em coming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
coke fueled gangbang

Love the route your taling here...coke crack...possible gangbang. Cant wait for next chapters

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
perfect.

thanks for writing again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Love these transformation stories

Please continue, I have only just discovered this story and love it. I would love to see her adding more piercings and tattoos, these are my big fetishes. May be a decent in to porn with visible slut, whore and drug tattoos on hands and neck so she can't hide her transformation from anyone. It could also be cool to be more extreme with her hair, shaved sides etc. These are just my suggestions, but I would love you to continue how ever you wish.

Best Regards from a now loyal reader

Fred

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
yay, she's back!

Glad you picked up the story again!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Any chance...

She'll end up knocked up by one of her clients some months hence?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Horrible...

... but exhilarating. I'm glad it's dark fantasy because, as I'm sure you know, this shit in real life is nothing but heartbreak. And I know first hand.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
more chapters

Cannot wait to read more chapters keep em cumming

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
love your writing

love your writing style.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

All description of events; what about the real process, the real transformation, what's going on in her head ?... Why you don't try to go deeper; just move the story from the guy; the guy is too basic to center the story on his mind. He looks like a robot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

great job man, keep up the great work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

loving this, hopefully she gets very thin. I would like to see her looks get worse.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
yes!

cant wait for more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Yes!

So excited for what comes next! There's no way she isn't pregnant from being filled so many times, I doubt she's been taking her birth control either! Would be a great next step for their relationship. Just my suggestion ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great story!

Cant wait to see her get more fuck up..crack..coke..gangbang . great work keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
next story

A while back in the comments you stated that you are working on a new story in addition to continuing this one. Can you provide us with any info as to the theme or basic story idea?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
slow updates

great story but the slow updates are causing me to lose interest in you as a writer

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
need our fix

Loving the story, cannot wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Great

Love this story!! Ready for the next step. I hope she gets even sluttier and more drugged up!! I think she should be paying Kevin with her body when they go for drugs. I'm hoping for a gangbang and other degrading adventures! Thanks and am looking forward to more chapters!!

Terri19Terri19about 1 year ago

I like the story but… it is getting to much as all the smoking and mixture of drugs is going over the top!

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