All Comments on 'Corruption of a Family Ch. 01'

nice please write more!

Loved it! Please write more!

Excellent beginning in to what I'm sure will be a GREAT series! Can hardly wait for more chapters.

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I'm torn. On the one hand, I'm not very much into supernatural powers to make a story happen. On the other hand, the outlook on this perfect Christian family being corrupted ist just too sweet … I definitely will try the next chapter as well.

This story offers quite an erotic premise! Nicely written with promise of more delightful encounters.

The premise itself is interesting and lends itself to a long (if repetitive) series. Myself, since her powers are directed specifically at Christians, I would be just as happy to see a scientific rationalist put a bullet through her brain before the end. Not because fundamentalist Christians and Muslims are a wonderful breed, but her cult is just as bad, if not worse for mankind's evolution as his and one bunch of crazy yokels is enough impediment to real advancement.

I couldn't put this one down. Will be watching closely for chapter two. Hope it's just as viciously sexy.

I believe in God, but I DO NOT believe in organized religion. More death and pain have been at the hands of organized religion than ANY other means since the beginning of time. At least in my mind. The people that are supposed to "love and care for their "brothers and sisters" have done nothing but bring hate and pain to those that are different from them. Especially to my friends and chosen family in the LGBT communities. So yeah, I can't wait for another chapter.

I loved this story and can't wait to see what is in store for him, his wife, and his daughter. Please, please, please finish!

My name is Don Wilson and I own the largest animal preserve in Iowa.

I came to this!

When will the next chapter be? I am excited for the next one.

This is a wonderful story of the corruption of a Christion.