by mjexxx
You have described Paula's internal thoughts perfectly. You have written one of the best sex scenes I've read. Your skill as a writer is obvious and I enjoyed the story a great deal. I'll allow others the privilege of making detailed comments.
almost disturbingly so. Tis rare to find such accomplishment on Lit nowadays. This is a gem to treasure. Thank you.
Beautifully written, and you capture the spirit of London in a way that only someone who truly loves (and hates) this city can do. I'll definitely look out for more from you. Five stars. :)