All Comments on 'Cote d'Azur Wedding Ch. 05'

I am glad you have been writing again. Hope to read more from you. Happy New Year. e

I had hoped that the wedding phoptographer would have a role. I can imagine how well you would have played it but thought that the timeline was too tight.

Travel Girl is my fav author and was delighted to see Wedding.

Like the other comment I am sorry it has reached the end - and that the photographer didn't feature. I was hoping that a story with the photographer and his photographic activities beyone wedding pics might have taken Beth way beyond her normal limits....

What about a fictional episode Beth....?

Well done Travel Girl. A wonderful adventure beautifully and skillfully told. Hot as all your stories are. What a life you must lead!

My dear

You have posted a superb final chapter to this story. I am so pleased to read your submissions and dream.

M

I love these stories. Travel Girl leads such an amazing life, and she tells these tales so well. One of the many great things about her work is that I feel I've gotten to know her through these stories, and so it's like these experiences belong to a friend, or even a girlfriend, and that really cranks up the heat for me.

Thanks, Travel Girl, for another fine effort. Until next time . . .

Snow Snake

I have enjoyed your work for years and this is another wonderful story. You have an uncanny knack for not only writing erotica but also writing it as a real-life story, not the literary equivalent of a porn flick. I eagerly await your next episode!

I just found your stories on 1/6/11 and read your series on being an art model. I loved it.

Today I found your most recent series. It was great.

I encourage you to write more, your style is friendly and easy to follow.

Wow, another great series about Beth.

well written. Thank you for the effort.

If I was lucky enough to be in bed with Beth, making love to her without a condom on, I don't think I would be shooting on her back or her belly...

I thought I had an active sex life but Beth leaves me way behind open mouthed with jealousy. She does make the most of the myriad opportunities that come her way

I loved your tale of Beth and am so jealous of the performance of Jurgen. To be able to sustain that amount of control with such a beauty as Beth. Wow.... I found your your description sensuous and erotic. Well done and keep writing

Great story. I dunno what else to say. Please continue and write about some "modelling". (Beth got the card of the photographer/camera man; remember?)

Loved all five chapters, probably #1 the best as I am familiar with Munich. I hope you will continue writing soon!

I cannot tell you how many times you ve made me cum. All your stories are fantastic.I get so damn horny reading your stories at work and then i go home and go crazy on my wife ;) Thank you for everything and please please keep writing. Love you.

I absolutely love your writing and i feel like i am actually there when i read your stories. You have such an adventurous life. Absolutely love your work and looking forward to your next . Any chance you can send me a photo so that i can worship you more properly? :)

Travel Girl

I really appreciate all of your writing, and enjoyed this from start to finish. Thank you for sharing! When is your next adventure?

I have read all your stories. Enjoyed them very much, well written, good story line, classy and interesting.

Hope you will continue to write. Thank You

Love the story.

Please write more adventures in Europe

What is true is that NOBODY believes you for even a second. Come back when you have an original/clever storyline (this certainly wasn't either) or at least something entertaining. Your dialogue was simply awful.

Don't listen to any negative comments left by "Anonymous" critics, they don't have the balls to leave their user name. You stated up front that you write with a slow build-up & that's what you did. Thank you

I will also read the ART MODEL serial.

BTW 5 *s

Read all 5 chapters, excellent,If the photographer and shown us

photos, this would have really made the stories even better

Just keep on writing, and keep on pleasing your readers

Respect is what you received, and respect is what you deserved, and do deserve. Very nice story.

I cannot wait for the next re-counting our your wonderful travels.

I miss passion in your stories. You, Beth, obviously loves to fuck. Even more, you love sucking cock. You keep telling that to your readers. There's just a mechanicalness to your fucking and sucking..

The only thing that is missing is that Beth tells her boyfriend all about these adventures and he is aroused and thrilled to be with this sexual goddess, and they make love while she tells him all the details.

Apart from DanielQSteeles ' when we were married' series this is the best series that I have ever read on lit. Thank u Travel Girl.

I said below what a great series. Really hot stories. Any one wishing to discuss email me qeteshhunt@gmail.com

I wanted a story to make me cum, being at home all alone. I knew this was perfect. Thank you travel girl. Gets better every time I read the whole series.

This is the sexiest series that I have read, this author oozes sex appeal through her stories. I sure wish that she would start writing again. An author whom I respect immensely, got to know me after I commented on one of his great stories. After exchanging a few messages he asked could he write a story with me as the main character basing it on some of my experiences that I had shared with him. He asked could I share my feelings from beginning to end when I masturbate. I can easily become aroused reading a well written erotic story. To get me in a full state of arousal, I CHOSE THIS STORY AND IT WORKED A TREAT.