All Comments on 'Cottage Love'

and lovely story . . . the solace I find in your stories is more than sexual . . . it in large measure fulfills the love all children have for their parents. As I did for my mother though she trashed me in every imaginable way; short of setting me on fire. Now long gone I still love her though I intuit she was mentally ill--forgiven--and more loved than ever.

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Nice. However the attempt at a cute ending went all wrong. Better to just let it end with the pregnancy.

good story,but you got lazy at the end.

...the ending is a little weak, but the slow build up of tension between the mother and son and the sensual description of their eventual coupling are so well done and highly erotically charged that this story still gets full marks...

Nice story. Look forward to more of your writings. Keep up your good work. Jorge Gonzalez

A very sexy and at the same time very compassionate story. Congratulations.

Unlike some of your 'critics' I did not find the ending at all lazy or weak. Quite the contrary. It, rather, provided food for thought, and was clearly not the 'throw-away' ending as interpreted by some.

The only real criticism I have is that I would like to have seen more flesh on the mother's acquiescence, from her point of view.

As always, a beautifully told story so simple, yet so powerful I actually saw the cove, the cottage and the sea.<br>

</br>The build-up is what's erotic and you did, as always, an excellent job. That's why I have you as one of my Favorites although, curiously, I'm not into Mother/Son incest. However, I swoon for a good romance and you're one of the best on Lit.<br>

</br>Thank you for sharing your wonderful work. ~ Candlelight062

unrealistic story no guy that has had no contact with girls and is suddenly alone with one and he has a crush on her mother or not and is constantly pushed away and belittled by her would want anything to do with her after the incident at the water he would not go back to the cottage except maybe to get a blanket or two he would find a place to sleep outside and avoid all contact with her since she was pushing him away all the time keep it atleast sounding real

It was a nice little fantasy. I thoroughly enjoyed it and did not find the ending too perplexing, as some seem to have.

This was wonderful. Dont listen to all the nay-sayers. keep it up.

BUT A STRANGE CONCLUSION...

like they say - vice is nice but incest is best - keep it in the family.....loved they way they gently became lovers the only thing to spoil the story was the fucking stupid bizarre ending....why???? It rather detracted from the story...spoilt it for me....

What a great story until you fucked it up with that stupid bloody ending. Sooooo disappointing.

but a very strange ending.....