All Comments on 'Could You Be My Wife?'

by neko_rae

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
daaayum!

well, that was certainly interesting. never read that particular fetish before, but it was very well done. i like the characters and the story line was fabulous. your descriptions were tasteful and well thought out. can't wait to read more by you, neko rae!

mottfanmottfanabout 9 years ago

Niko-rae.

I had never heard of this fetish called "Body Inflation" until now. You are an excellent writer and know how to tell a story. I read the entire story because I wanted to know what was going to happen to Terra.

Great writing, keep it up! 5 stars!!

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