All Comments on 'Council of Elders Ch. 05'

Well done and no not too cliche as he recognised Freddie through his eyes. Can't wait to read more, you're getting better with every chapter :)

Owen and Fenris are great characters. I love being able to watch their attraction grow. Keep up the good writing and keep posting.

Like it, keep the chapters coming.

It's turning into such a fantastic fast action and romance story! One mistake though, you say that Owen had trouble explaining musicals to Fenris, and Fenris didn't really understand, but near the beginning of the story, Fenris uses the term 'there's no place like home.' from The Wizard of Oz.

I really enjoy how you have made these paranormal creatures to adapt to your imagination, and that you add a science-ey feel to everything so that it makes the story that much more realistic!

Keep up the amazing work, can't wait to read more.