All Comments on 'Counter Ops Ch. 01'

I like this lead. Where is part II?

i submitted it today so should be a couple days

is inherently dangerous and probably borders on illegality. TK U MLJ LV NV

Don't bother - just another unfinished story

There = A location eg. "There is the Murderer" or "There I go"

They're = short for 'They are' eg. "They're saying Ed will be the new chief"

The first half of the first page is full of mistakes using words that sound similar to the word that should be used but are in fact the wrong words to use. These mistakes won't be caught by spell check. They are the mistakes of someone who didn't pay attention to English class in the sixth grade. Makes it too difficult to read.

Thank you for the English lesson, Professor. I'm sure there are absolutely no errors in any of your stories. I understand McGraw Hill is seeking a "expert" proof reader.

*****Good start plenty action looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for sharing.