All Comments on 'Countermove Ch. 03'

I really like this story. It is not sexy. It is far more clinical than erotic but I am jazzed to learn the end. The heroine after all is a bad person yet I still want her to find a way to win. Plus I'm hoping that Domme has the same powers as Onyx and the mean bitch. Poor Bambi needs to be rescued too.

Can't wait to read on. It is hot, erotic, and the story line is interesting. The MC factor is well played in. Great writing.