All Comments on 'Countermove Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Loving it

Going really well as a story, i like how its written as well the pace. Please More

Great work

David

luther78luther78almost 16 years ago
Awesome

Keep up the good work. I love the flow of the story. Although I hate the feeling of geting left hanging and wanting more, this story is amazing!

RobertowRobertowalmost 13 years ago
Very exiting scenario!!

Great scenario, i like how the story happens to go on.

The fact that the heroine is getting more trouble is very exiting!

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