All Comments on 'Countermove Ch. 10'

The series was a very erotic and thought out text.You will grace us with another i hope.

Erotic wrestling? With Mind Control? What's not to like!? You've got a great imagination and a way with words that left me captivated. Hope to hear more from you soon!

Your humble remarks at the start were pretty much unneeded-- you wrote masterfully about a form of martial arts, discussing lots of facets to the style that truly made me interested beyond just getting wank material. I actually blazed through the latter 7 chapters all in one sitting because the plot was excellent, too. This is just insanely well-written, and I really hope to see more from you.

you made Tyger a slave to herself and total skip the sex at the end. That was the build of to all of this. Then you didn't deliver...Disappointed.

Any chance of doing more stories with these characters? Maybe something a bit more romantic between two of the wrestlers (or Diane and one of them)

This was incredibly good! Besides the thorougly entertaining plot, the writing was amazing and I loved that the spelling and punctuation wasn't that of a four year old. Thank you so much for such a great story and please write some more!!!!!!!!!!

Liked your story but it left me wanting more in the ending. I assumed we would hear more of the treatment of tyger after her loss. Good story.

I don't see anything new from you lately but if you check this you should write again.. Love your work!!

sex

Excellent series. Thanks.

good series, nice plot, interesting characters. A+ : )

Very exciting story!Onyx learned the hard way to treat people like she wants to be treated and became a bimbo named Bunny for a year to a woman she had mistreated!She had been a mind controling wrestler but was going to end up as a bimbo who treats other people with respect!

I thought this was a really well done story. Lots of sex action - that's why we're here, obviously - as well as actual character development and a recognizable plot and story arc.

Clearly a cut above the common rabble, Chrystal. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Maybe and alternate ending where tiger wins and Shannon gets fucked stupid?

Good job :)

Hope to see some of her further training.

Thanks, great storytelling as aleays

Steve