All Comments on 'Country Club MILF'

Very nice!

This is the first story of yours that I have read. I thoroughly enjoyed it! I liked the gentle way you brought the characters together and developed the storyline. I could almost picture myself in his place (don't I wish...)

Get someone to proofread though. Lots of small errors but a really good story.

This was a very hot, enjoyable story. You didn't rush anything and it was all very realistic. There must be another chapter though as you've left very much unsaid, but implied. It would be nice to have them continue, with her possibly getting pregnant. Also you kept bringing the nanny in, how about finding out her and Carol have a thing for each other and him fulfilling all their desires??

It was a great read and I look forward to more.

Love it , love it!

bring on the rest of the story,I'm waiting.

I really enjoyed Carol's seduction of Michael. You did a great job in the way you paced the story leading up to their first sexual encounter. There interaction was already very hot by the time Michael finally gets to have her, and it stayed that way until the end.

I loved the way you wrote this, the seduction, the teasing, the imagary. Although there could have been more depth to the sex scenes or the Christmas holidays.

But what did Edward do with the dough he stole?

Could you bring the family maid into it? Hot threesome...

Polished writing, good plot and character development. A delightful read. Thank you

Do not change a thing ! It was perfect , well written and grealty explained in detail . I wonder though is this a true story or a story that you want to come to reality . lot of thought to detail . excellent job. I am not a perv and I love reading well written and steamy stories.

very interested in reading a followup to this initial story.....see if Michael was going to be hired on within Carol's company. Would be very interested in finding out if Michael took control on showing Carol more varied experiences.

As an older woman that has a secret love for younger guys, this one really got me going! thank you! - Colleen (47/DWF)

good love story, with great sex-nice plot, characters; nicely written, thanks

Very well written, enjoyed reading it

The story, well written, with just the proper amount of lust, yet tasteful enough while drawing the family environment. Pleasing the kids, pleasing each other, not obviously flaunting, being discrete, and a happy reunion culminating in a loving family environment. Very well done.

So complete, from beginning to end!

Thank you!

While this site is dedicated to sexual escapades of all kinds, the best stories on here are the love stories, where the sex is part of a bigger picture. The ones that may start out as lust, but where a real relationship develops are really compelling, especially where they are realistic. It's always good to think as you read that "this could happen." I would have laughed, though, if you had her riding him in the car while driving up the Skyway on the way back from Fredonia, or wherever the final meet was. Maybe next time, it can be in Salamanca-they could stay at the casino. Nicely done. Hope there will be a second installment once they have been together for a while, and that living together does not spoil the relationship, since day to day living is a lot different than having an affair.

I guess I started with your last story first, and totally enjoyed it! Now I will go back and read the rest of them in order to see how you got to this point! Great story! 5*

Excellent story, passionate, caring, warm, erotic and tender. This is a perfect description of a loving couple who put each other ahead of themselves.

Great story. Looking forward to the sequel.

Bravo!

Excellent story.