All Comments on 'Country Store Ch. 19'

Are you going to write any more stories?

to see great stories end

This was nice, action packed, and to the point. So many stories ramble on when they don't need to. However, a lot of the side characters are a little one-dimensional. I would have liked to see the Holly character expanded upon. I would also have liked to see some more resolution to Kim/Samantha, perhaps a meeting later in life with some peace made between them, and maybe a little passionate lovemaking. I think the Sigmas got off a bit easy, too. Their practices were a bit questionable, and I would have liked to see the ones that took part in the gang rape get some form of punishment. Henry was just dropped from the story, too. I wanted to see what happened to him as well.

The ending was tied up in a bit too neat of a package, everyone got everything they wanted. Perhaps a 20th chapter would be good. I honestly felt the love between Kim and Tracey far more than Ken. Would have been neater for me to see Ken get punished a bit for using Kim the way he did in the beginning, and maybe end up with Holly or even Samantha in the epilogue. Still happy, but changed for realizing what he was party to.

Not trying to be too critical. This is one of the hottest stories I have read in a while, especially considering the rape/reluctance/gonzo thing is usually not my cup of tea. But it's stored in document form on my hard drive, which rarely happens. You did a pretty good job here. I am officially requesting more. lol

I look for long stories to listen to while I work. The good ones make the time fly by. Your story took me on a ride of emotions I don’t usually experience. This is truly one of the most compelling stories I’ve ever experienced! Please don’t stop writing and stand your ground. I truly loved it!❤️

Larry