All Comments on 'Country Walk'

by The Thirdman

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steamyseductresssteamyseductressover 13 years ago
COULD'VE BEEN BETTER

The passion was there, but the combination of repetiveness, bad punctuation and too many run-on sentences really hindered the story.

rileyanne_62rileyanne_62over 1 year ago

Cute and arousing story :)

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