All Comments on 'Couples Massage'

I almost liked the story, but a masseur is a man, and a masseuse is a woman. I found the confusion annoying and disruptive.

,,, this is really a very realistic story, only it usually includes lots of relaxing alcoholic drinks first to "loosen" the inhibitions up .. please write a massage series .. Thanks..

That was freakin hot!! My wife and I would totally love to do that!!

The present tense is a poor choice. The story would be much easier for the reader if you use the past tense to describe something that happened in the past, especially when you are describing second person singular activity. If you don't know what this means... It means "Learn to write!"