All Comments on 'Couples Teaching Couples Again'

Again, it is the simple stuff which brought the grade down. Good story, but you are recounting these as if the storytellers wife wasn't there. I find this to be a rather cheap device. It makes me wonder "Wasn't this woman there or was she so screwed up she can't remember what happened?"

The best POV's are either straight 1st person telling the READER what is going on or 3rd person where it is narrated. This other stuff just doesn't cut it. Otherwise, you do have talent. just need a little polish.

An ass writing about asses.

Good story but it is told like we’re eavesdropping on a husband sharing a fantasy with his wife - “I do this” and “you (wife) do that..” is a huge short cut to get through it but it is also a constant reminder that the story isn’t true. It’s completely fine to be a fantasy fiction and i do like this story, especially when Kathy sucks the wife cum off his cock, so I would read more if this story continued.