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"So did you guys plan that, with bringing along the condoms and the lube?" Eric asks?
I reply, "Well, we had sort of hoped you might be willing to. It seemed like you enjoyed the last time, and I think we're all mature enough to be able to handle this kind of thing.
Kathy leaned over and gave me a quick kiss on the cheek. "Thank you so much for all that you've done for us. You've taught me things that I never would have even suspected. And who knew my shy innocent friend from college would turn out to be so good at this?" Both of you girls giggle at this, and embrace. I know you're enjoying your naked bodies pressed to each other, and it seems she might be as well. But she lets you go, and says, "I hope we can do this again real soon. Until then, you've given Eric and I a lot to practice!"
They embrace again, and start getting comfortable in the bed. We go ahead and get out of it, gathering our clothes and once again letting ourselves out. Both spent, happy, we are grateful for our friends, and for the new level we've taken that friendship to. As we drive away, we speculate on what might happen next time...
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoGood story but it is told like we’re eavesdropping on a husband sharing a fantasy with his wife - “I do this” and “you (wife) do that..” is a huge short cut to get through it but it is also a constant reminder that the story isn’t true. It’s completely fine to be a fantasy fiction and i do like this story, especially when Kathy sucks the wife cum off his cock, so I would read more if this story continued.
Chagrinedover 19 years agoAgain, it is the simple stuff which brought the grade down. Good story, but you are recounting these as if the storytellers wife wasn't there. I find this to be a rather cheap device. It makes me wonder "Wasn't this woman there or was she so screwed up she can't remember what happened?"
The best POV's are either straight 1st person telling the READER what is going on or 3rd person where it is narrated. This other stuff just doesn't cut it. Otherwise, you do have talent. just need a little polish.
