by writergeek
That was hotter than the first one. Will Chris just watch or maybe join in? I'm ready for chapter three.
So sexy and hot up until the last two sentences, when you brought Chris into the room. Lauren and Courtney sound good together.
Please make Chris go away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It has been really good until Chris walked in. And yes, I am a guy saying that!
Ed
this was a very good ch. 2, better than the 1st one I guess it does pay for someone to text you by mistake, can't wait to see what ch. 3 brings
Chapter one was a lead into chapter two both outstanding look forward to the third chapter x
Courtney's husband was killed by a drunk-driver so would she happily drive her car after "...a few more rounds of drinks..."? Sounds a bit implausible when you think about it unless you intend that she has a drinking problem.
I hope Chris has some fun with the ladies and include Courtney and Laurens friends also maybe next chapter include them taking a shower together and maybe trimming their pussies and trying strapon loving.
very nicely written, talented writer and easy to read. thanks and keep it coming. wis it could happen to me, well we all do.
Glad this is fiction cause 1. While sexting can be quite hot, it's another thing to meet said stranger, go to her home and have sex all in a matter of hours. 2. They are professing love and giving themselves to one another, umm 'xcuse me, Lauren has a boyfriend. 3, Lauren's boyfriend, who is suppose to be out of town for two week and for which she told him she met a girl, all of a sudden shows up and walks in while the women are sleep after a heavy night of passionate sex and talking. This is so urgh! Creepy and sneeky. Lastly, Courtney deserves more - like a love of her own, not some part-time female lover looking to satisfy her periodic urges for women, while hoping to marry her boyfriend. Like I said, thank goodness it's fiction. (Like a Warning Label) Please don't try this at home.
It's nice, but the sudden switch in viewpoint was a bit of a jolt. From chapter 1, I expected that this would be entirely Courtneycentric.