by writergeek
see what happens when you text a strange number, as far as it goes I would really like to read another chapter ( without Chris be there) of course
This was a sexy and well written story . Lauren and Courtney are sexy together and the addition of Michelle enhanced an already Hot relationship.
Just a request if there is to be more .Please don't include Chris in the sex scenes as it would be a big turn off, for this lesbian anyway.
Thank you .
i liked the first two better, Michele was kinda of thrown in, but still i loved it.
Whoever said that didn't know what they were talking about. Two's company and three's an orgy. That's better.
I thought this chapter was very beautifully written and sexy chapter! I agree though, about not, or minimally including Chris, in future chapters. Have you considered including other kinks, though? Like, for example, Courtney and Michelle worshipping Lauren's belly? Or Or Michelle and Lauren worshipping Courtney's? :)
I can’t wait to see what happens next with the 3 of them. I agree with the others leave Chris out of the sex scenes. As a lesbian, those sort of stories don’t do much for me. However, if you want to incorporate him, perhaps that could be a different storyline all together and posted in the group sex category instead of adding him into a lesbian story.
... and then there were three. While there was a hot mènage á trois of women, there was no substance, no direction. Where is this heading to for Lauren and Courtney? What about Lauren's boyfriend and their relationship? Yes this is fiction but for me, it's starting to lose its believability and reading more and more like a "get-off" Oh well, I will just lower my expectations - Hot daisy chain