All Comments on 'Courtyard Friends'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Well done, tongue in cheek little piece.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Pleasant

Short and sweet. Pleasant little story to read.

patientleepatientleeabout 9 years ago
This is a great little story.

I love that she repeated the made up name like that. If a man wrote that, it would be creepy and stalkerish, but from a woman's POV, it was fun. Good work!

Pulsifer42Pulsifer42about 5 years ago
A Great Prologue

You created an exciting attractive sensuous situation and then you slipped away into the dark night and left it hanging there. With some careful imaginative thought you could end up with a block buster story.

naughtyandy4unaughtyandy4uover 2 years ago

What a delightful tease. But did he? I was only too happy to show myself to the neighbour when I saw her masturbating.

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