All Comments on 'Cousin's House Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Good writing

But besides all of the ways two people can have sex, there needs to be an intriguing plot. Everyone on here knows how to have sex. Besides being cousins, you need to add a twist to make it interesting. I don’t mean to add more people into the sex, I mean something that tugs at the heartstrings of emotion.

Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

slow it down.. you're still rushing the plot along.

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