All Comments on 'Covert Directives'

Both of these are so good. I usually only pick stories with one or two pages cause I'm in a hurry, but I find myself wishing these had more. You've done a great job of setting the scene and leaving just enough suspense at the end to make your readers want more. Looking forward to part three.

Heya Devia,

Few stories catch my interest enough to read more than a chapter or so, but this one held my attention ALL the way throughout.. 2 points that were really great was that "oh shit" moment when she suddenly realized it was "him" watching her. And second, the almost psychological foreplay accomplished w/o him ever actually touching her. Definitely in my opinion, written to a professional authors level. Think I read wrong one first so.... Off to read your other here... Lol

Well written all tha was, Devia. .👍☺