All Comments on 'Coveted Cousin Liz'

Is there more coming? Is Liz a stripper? A pornstar? What was it she wanted to tell him the first night but then decided not to? Are they going to end up together? Good start, but I need more.

What a great tale and foundation for a few more to follow it. Keep them coming :)

Bring on part 2

Great story! Need more chapters, please!

I totaly agree with gametime279, there are way to many loose ends, for this to be a single story.

I really enjoyed the story, but tis should lead to at least 1 more chapter, maybe even make a whole series of it.

Both a sexy and sweet story wrapped up in neat writing. Looking foward to more.

Please continue with this story. I really enjoy the build up to relationships in stories, but hate when you draw me in and don’t continue into the second season. Great story.

Lovely story, hope they find a way to be together forever. Sometimes its just right!

Part II Please.

There has to be more to this story.

Woodbgood

Please tell me there is a part 2 coming soon. Such a great story and well written, can’t wait to read more about these two.

Really good story! These characters resonate so well together that there should be a followup. PLEASE!

More please

You brought back memories from my own adolescent days.

Well done!

Oh wow, reminds me of my favorite cousin and myself.

This needs a follow up! Please! So good!

Well written, BUT---Like all of your stories that I have thus far read, the ending leaves the reader hanging. I want to look around to see the next chapter. But you left it off.

More, please and thank you.

The story is very hot. And very sad. I think Chris will be disappointed and may be left with a broken heart.

Liz is keeping some kind of secret. Won't talk about her life and work. But she hangs around beautiful, uninhibited girls. Sucks and fucks very professionally. Is she a prostitute? Escort?

Very sad. Her parents, especially her mother, have been oppressing her all her life. Caused her problems. Ruined her life.

Her love for Chris is all she has left. And she seems to realize that she can't have a future with him, so she decides to have at least a little piece of happiness.

But the story is definitely not finished.

Like others, I got there's more to this one. I hope Radomir is off in his guess, but I'm aggressor he might be right and there is a painful end coming... Or a cute redemption story after a reveal of a painful/shameful past.

The fact that she didn't kiss him at new years kind of stressed that potential. Shouldn't the alcohol induced lack of inhibitions made it more likely that she'd kiss him in public?

I guess we'll just have to wait and see.

I went from a 5+ to a 2 stars when there was no ending & I looked at the date it was written realizing that we were just cut off mid jerk.

What a pisser that was. Very disappointing!

This author has a knack for writing really hot, erotic stories, but cuts them off too soon.

Bill S.

O. K. Good 4

Bill S.

Write more

Great story telling. Really enjoyed it. No criticism.

Damn good story until it fell off the cliff into a great abyss. Still gave it a 5, but really wish you would try to wrap it up in another chapter.