by aznrd
excellent; the plot was well done and the story flowed well. Thank you for the entertaimnet.
Excellent story - not too long, not too short! I really enjoyed the whole western theme of the story. The detailed character development and colorful background helped to flesh out the whole scene in the reader's mind. Your words flow smoothly and easily and I do hope you continue to add to this story. It has the makings of a great series!