All Comments on 'Craigslist Chronicles Ch. 06: Thomas'

I want to be fucked

Using the same words and phrases multiple times distracts from the story. "Fuuuuuuck" "I couldn't help but" "shooting a load." Your writing will be stronger if you vary the wording you use. Keep writing!

Too bad Craigslist Personals is down. Government interference due to people unlawfully using the website. People will still find ways for hook ups..😉😂

Fuck!!!!! I miss Craigslist!!!! I sucked sooo many anonymous cocks!!!! Anybody know what is replacing it?

A total bottom slut. At least this top seems to care for him and not only as hole to use and discard when finished like some of the other tops. Tops need to appreciate a good bottom, because without them tops would not have any good bottoms. I always care for my bottoms and I wanted them to be happy and fully satisfied. I am always in the mood to give the bottom my cock anytime he needs it and in return a good bottom is already when I need it. It is a 2 way street.

Absolutely loved this story I'm definitely gonna add it to my favourites list. Just wanted to let you know there were only 1 spelling mistake:

Quickening his pace, he started leaning towards me, grasping my waist*, jackhammering into me. "Fuuuuck," I grunted as the bed shook violently.

And it felt like you were missing a word here:

After that last ** took up with the black kid in my car, I need a week to recover... Damn my ass burned for a few days.

But otherwise an excellent story and very, very hot!!! Its also nice to see a good top cu I find we tend to get a bad rap. Especially when you think about all the people who use the top title to misuse their bottom. I look forward to reading the rest of your stories. Thank you for sharing!!!