All Comments on 'Cramped in the Closet'

The characters felt a little rushed. The closet idea was good and well executed but I felt it was ruined by the anal happening so quickly and then them getting caught in front of the whole family and they kept on fucking. Not a bad first attempt though.

very good!

Love how sis finds out that what her bro's got jumping around in his pants, his "huge fucking cock," can do her tight little twat a world of good. Not to mention how "fulfilled" she feels when he blows his brotherly balls and shoots her a great big cuntful of family semen. Family semen just fucking belongs up family cunts.

"OH GOD! Mommy he's filling my assss!!" SO GOOD! gunna cummmMMM!

"Buttfuck meeee baby brother, give me all the cummmmm!"

Fucking juvenile dialog.

Good story. Keep it going.

One of the best stories I have ever read on here - hillarious ending

Give a whole new meaning to "coming out of the closet".

if this is meant as comedy you get 6 out of 5 stars. i peed my pants laughing.

if this is meant as erotic i got to give you 1 out of 5 stars.

still i had a good laugh.

Well done

I didn't know whether to laugh or stroke. This was a very good story. Sex isn't always dramatic. I've had a couple of experiences where laughter suddenly broke out. In this case it was only the reader laughing, but so what? 5 for comedy, and 5 for the story. Please continue.

I love the new idea. I like the story. I think you are interested making stories fun to read as well as entertainment

Nate and Rachel REALLY came out of the closet!

And, we know Uncle Frank thinks it was really hot. Whether there are two funerals the next day, we can only speculate ... ROFLOL. 5*

Perfectly executed in my opinion, and my favorite story I've read this month. I look forward to seeing more from you, Ampersand!

That was the real Surprise to everyone including the love birds.....

...and it is hilarious! Bloody well done - give us some more :-)

So damn funny, I give it a BIG 5!

Forget her grabbing his ankles. She should have reached up and grabbed his crotch! She was overloaded and out of control!

So damn funny and good.

Absolutely fucking hilarious! Please continue the story.

That was hilarious!

Did this happen to you? If so you lucky person

One hell of a good read . Great story Thanks .Hope you write more like it .....

I love these stories where people are fucking right under other peoples noses. Also like the road trip stories.

That's a 5 on the funny scale. Still laughing!

This was almost as funny as it was sexy! Sorry dad - I just came in sis's pussy and ass - Happy Birthday! I can't imagine a sequel to this story but if you can I'd like to read it! Thanks for sharing. You made my day.

It is clear that the cabinet is not the best place to hide these siblings. I laughed a lot with the scene when the closet is opening in front of everyone while they are having sex, I can not imagine the face of everyone, especially mom and dad when he enters the house and sees them.

hope that the author wants to write a sequel, or more, of this story. At the moment it is very funny.

5* for you.

I apologize for my English, is not my native language.

"Suprise" just fucking funny as hell.

Well... A very good read... One of the best not only from detail, and description but also funny as hell. Loved it. Would love to read the attempt at a sequel...

Just hope you don't do what everyone else does: make mom and dad actually be estranged brother and sister...

Great story....

This is by far one of the hottest stories I've read on this site. I'm not usually a fan of sibling incest, but you, sir, have made this one of my favorites. I'd love to see another story with Rachel and Nate.

The sexiest and funniest story I have ever read. I almost choked with laughter as they fell out of the cupboard in front of the family still locked together and covered in cum.

Not the best lead in, but still fucking funny.

Thos story had me rolling woth laughter, and it got me super wet. Took me around 5 minutes to cum when it usually takes me 20!

5* all around! Woukd love to read a seqel!

Best. Ending. Ever.

Best story I have ever read. Period.

I was suddenly laughing my butt off! Nicely done. 5*

I was doing what comes natural when your alone and have lots of free time but when I reached the end I just stopped and just started laughing I wish I could have been to a birthday party like this it is hilarious, I really hope you create a sequel as I would like to see what happens next or even the other party goers pov of this story. 10 out of 10

You could have put this one in the Humor & Satire category with its hilarious ending, but it was hot as an Incest/Taboo story as well. To the commenter who called the dialogue "juvenile" - those quotes from Rachel were bang-on (no pun intended) with the hilarity of the moment. Loved it - well done, Ampersand!

Laughed so hard at the end.The comedy at the end makes me horny and happy

One of the best i've read, hands down

Literally this is the hottest story on this site which I browse in my down or should I say up time I read this wonderful story and got to the end and I loved laughing my ass off after just unloading my ass off but thanks for both and I hope to see more in the future?! It's a wonderful 5* worthy surprise this is what they call butt-on calamity (Every pun intended)

accidents happen, but hope for a sequal

One very funny ending

Hilarious and hot!

Great job.

I loved this story! I sincerely hope the author continues writing.

Was wondering how to get cum stains out of silk

Talk about "coming out of the closet"....

Great story. A little on the unbelievable, but interesting.

What a surprised.

Wonderful surprise for Dad.

I hope we have another chapter.

rather than just describing fucking. Very funny, weird, but fun. Well done.

Great story! loved the ending you described it so well an poor old dad! ha ha ha

Please write some more

I couldn't help it. I started laughing. In sorry, but come on! That's hilarious. You, madam or sir, are a genius. You do not just make the porn, you make the story. You make reality and fiction and combine it into a simple and easily understood plot but at the same time haven't dumbed it down. In truth, I give you high ranks on this work

Also. Forgot to add. The uncle don't give a fuck.

Thanks, that gave me a good laugh!

Yo this is the sexiest, funny and most turn on story I have read so far, made me laugh, thank you very much, I cant help but wonder what came after that, LOL

Seriously fantastic ending haha well done :D

As ridiculous as it seems, I can actually imagine something like this happening.

Your descriptions are perfect and the flow is great.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts and talent.

Kudos

No matter how crazy it sounds, when.you consider the situation it's the kind of thing that could happen.

Enjoyed this fun story.

Enjoyed the tension.

Weird but funny ending, well-built tension, no plot armor or miracles preventing the consequences, decent story.

Hot story, has a couple of moments that kick me out nu good overall. Thanks for the story.

Oh my... This was HILARIOUS!!! I was almost crying by the time I he got done cumming.

Very fun read!

with the anal

crap

Just another “virgin with giant member bangs Stacey sister with enormous breasts”. The anal part was extremely dumb.

Great story even better with anal.