by inkquisitive
OK, highly improbable, but this is erotic fiction, after all, and your story is good. Or, maybe not improbable, you never know in Texas!
Please, for the love of God and all that is holy, continue the story.
I've read alot and I mean alot of these stories and this one is my fave!!!!!! Please write a second part.
A bit rushed and could do with a bit more character development. Several spelling errors that could be caught with a proofreader or editor.
I want more OMG I hate that! I was just like Lacey, so close by the end of the story but it ended before I could cum! Ugh! :(