All Comments on 'Crazy Little Thing Called Sex Pt. 05'

One of the most sweetest, innocent, romantic and sexy story I have read here and I can't believe it ended so soon :(

Would have definitely wanted more. Thanks for writing this :)

Yeah I'd love to read more about these two

And wow, your description of Jennifer was almost fairy like which made her feel special. The real Jennifer's aura must have been captivating!

Also, your writing from a female perspective is really good, especially in the first chapter :)

OMG ! I'm a sobbing wreck. I don't whether to curse you or kiss you. I lost my first, my only true love over 45 years ago and I never recovered. Oh to have known love like your characters throughout my life.

...an outstanding story.

Wonderful job. Wish you would continue the story about their marriage having the twins.

My wife and I have been together that long, and we each dread being eventually alone. Belief in an afterlife would be a real comfort, but as rational beings we don't have that comfort.

That last paragraph was surplus to requirements, and tended to devalue what had gone before, I think. Not only existence beyond the grave, but an authorial voice completing the narrative.

Still gave the story 5*, however. Thank you Ian.

Beautiful.